Airplanes and hand grenades

A broken heart is like death is something you can’t avoid. In many ways they are the same. In death you lose your self. With a broken heart you lose your self to someone. The only different is that you can mend a heart you can’t raise the dead. When your heart is broken you feel like your falling. Nausea sets in and you start to feel Pressure build on your body your just waiting to hit the ground. I can’t tell you death is like because there one to ask. Time will past and the smallest thing acts as a grenade. A exposition of memoirs and pain fills you up. You can’t move, you feel as if you are waiting to die. Franklin said the “only two things in life are certain death and taxes. I think there is a third a broken heart.

Reviews

[Quattro Hall]

To whom it may concern.
I thought this title was freaking epic! so epic its a album title to one of my high school band more or less. no need to look anything up we sucked and didn't go anywhere. was not the lyrics... IT was our playing lol what you gonna do.

[catofjade]

Killer. Absolutely killer. The best parts: "exposition of memoirs", my automatic response to that phrase: yes, please!! And more, and more, and even more, from you!! Best part number two, but nowhere near second in impact: Your last two lines. Killer, absolutely killer. Oh, I said that already!!

P.S.: Your ability to just reach right into your heart and pull out the stuff we all feel but never say is phenomenal. Actors have that quality...well, the good ones, anyway!! Do you act, also? Tee hee, inquiring minds want 2 know!!

[Quattro Hall]

No I do not act. Always thought I would be good at it tho lol.
Thank you for your words jade.
Im glad someone likes my stuff. ;p ill write you a PM soon to give you more detail and asking for you help with something.

[Mark]

I like the analysis.

[Quattro Hall]

thank you much Mark