Fight better

Only we can change inequallity

Fight better.
Somewhere in Africa a boy aged 13 is up at 3.
12 minutes later he's joined by 3 other boys.
The four make a pack to be used in an attack.
A village raid with a simple plan: in it, no one will be spared.
But first, they have to train. They'll fight later;
Because after training; they'll fight better.
There are 4 other packs under one commander
30 commanders in total, you do the math.
In another continent, math has been done
A boy aged 13 is now set for some fun; the X box comes to life,
In the background is a melody.. from Simple plan,
12 minutes later, he's joined by 3 other boys.
Different places they play online,
The only violence they know; is Taken 5.
Today they do training, they'll fight letter,
Because after training; they'll fight better.
Esen

Reviews

[A.marie.speaks]

Oh, wow. You gave me goosebumps. I love the lines you've drawn here between continents, between the idea of war, murder and video games.the numbers throughout brought a uniqueness. Great write!

[Esen]

Thanks alot A.marie.speaks. you are my first review ever and that makes you special to me. Am glad you appreciate my piece. Thanks again.

[A.marie.speaks]

You are very welcome! You are very talented. Keep writing, and sharing our work

[Esen]

i definitely will.