Lunacy

When your expectations don't match what's in front of you, look left and right or else it will drive you crazy.

The billoing clouds
Highlighted the mornng I
Escaped my pilowed walls

Missed rol call
I hoped they din't notice
So soon afte I left
Snuck down the starcase
I was ery quiet
Not even the camras
Got the sstem right

Looked back at the hspital
Even as they gave prsuit
There is a crak
Tear in eality
Everyone's world was mddening
Rather than amaing
So I went back to solitar

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

great scene. great use of misspellings to show something may be off or missing about the narrator. i infer that that this isn't the first time the narrator has escaped the ward.

[Melinda Weber]

Everyone needs a dose of lunacy to survive :)

[Haunzwürthe]

;) My lips are sealed...

[Never Good Enough]

Curious? Not like the rest of your maticulous writting. Were you writting out of anger or passion I wonder?