love after struggle

Old poem

Have you ever seen
The moon on the darkest of days?
Your body, frozen solid
Yet the heart burns like silver,
Dancing as slow as winter's calm.
Demanding the storm

Is

The rise,

The fall,

The lover's call.

Reviews

[Sarahthirk]

I love this! I love how you begin with a question. my favorite line was "yet the heart burns like silver." I can feel the pain in this poem. Very nice job