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          I dreaMt of you, or did I

         And felt your presence sO near

        Tender, loving eyes gazed at me

        A warm Hand stroked my forehead

        You smiled at me, and I smilEd back

        YouR soft white wings, tucked

 

                      

Author's Note

Google image.

Reviews

[Neytri]

Very impressive way of expressing your feelings. Loved the way you inscribed the word Mother.

[Willard Wells]

Mother looking in to be sure your safe. Very unique way of designing your work and great job. Thanks,

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you, Willard!

[sereenaoutloud]

This is beautiful and very creative to spell out mother working the write!
Really loved this tribute !! ;)

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you so much, kind poet!

[Gabriel's Last Breath (..]

very sad to imagine myself in the situation

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Yes, it was/is very hard losing my Mom. She was my best girl! Thank you for the read.

[C]

This is touching. I would remember this whenever my mom's not at my side.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you, Chelsey!

[ba_mcfarlane]

Deceptively simple, and so sweet.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you. :)

[Shane Mohamed]

Indeed. Mothers are noble creatures. Thank you for honoring yours.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you for your review, Shane.

[Sami Khalil]

This is a great tribute. Sooo lovely and appreciative...:).....

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[Emily]

Well done!
I really liked this one!
Keep it up!

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you, Emily!

[R Smith]

that's beautiful Sharon, a fitting tribute on Mother's day, love the white wings and the way you weaved Mother into the lines, just lovely, bravo :)

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you so much for your lovely review. I am happy you enjoy it!

[R Smith]

you are most welcome :)