Haiku Moon

                    

             his glimmering face

             

    seeks me out through lace curtains

             the man in the moon

Author's Note

Google image inspired.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i hope he has only good intentions...
lovely setting created here.

j.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Me, too! Thank you for your review!

[Kelsey Schadt]

I enjoyed your poem, but what about switching the last two words in the second line?

his glimmering face
seeks me out through curtain lace
the man in the moon
I know a haiku isn't meant to rhyme, but I think it's catchy.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

You know, I kind of like that! Thank you for your read and suggestion!

[Willard Wells]

Very beautiful imagery in short verse. Thank you for sharing.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank YOU for your review!

[Relic]

Pictures often inspire poets to create. You've done that well here. I love the moon. :)

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Many thanks! I appreciate your review. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Simply outstanding in few syllables...:)....

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

That is high praise and truly appreciated!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly....:).....

[thewholesoul]

beautiful. my favourite so far. a very intimate portrayal of the moon

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you so much!

[Adam Adams]

The shine of moon's always compared to the face of beautiful lady. Your deep Haiku treasures the value of gentle man in disguise. Liked it. Well penned.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you for your review!

[J.S. Kloss]

Beautiful haiku! I haven't written a haiku since elementary school, but you've inspired me to do so with this lovely piece!

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for your review!

[Tina Kline]

Very nice. I like it. You did a great job on this haiku.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you, Tina!

[Tina Kline]

You are welcome.

[Jamestown]

Fantastic!
Great Haiku:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Thank you for your review! :)