Haiku ~ Fall

Haiku ~ Fall

A Poem by Sharon L.H. Kelly

baring her shoulders

blushing leaves recline, sublime

naked beauty sleeps

                                     


                     




© 2015 Sharon L.H. Kelly


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Sharon L.H. Kelly
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Oh, I love this one! You've captured the essence of fall in so few words. This photo works well with your haiku.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!
Artwork and words. A perfect journey into the season of Fall. Thank you Sharon for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Coyote!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome Sharon.
this is so cool....a haiku that could be a senryu if taken as allegory....

the tree in fall losing leaves, or the woman in a freefall of love, letting go of inhibition.

so nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review, Jacob!
Wonderful! The imagery using the photo and reading the words is nicely paired.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
beautiful and vivid imagery! well done! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

10 Years Ago

Many thanks for your kind review!
Indra Neil

10 Years Ago

u r most welcome! :)
The last line is a beautiful closing line.
Wonderfully presented.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Cherry Pepperweb

10 Years Ago

:) it's good to dance every so often.
You're welcome.
Beautiful! Amazing how so few words can sum up such a beautiful time of year

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Sarah!
This is beautiful I Imagine spring being this beautiful being from your Haiku.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!
Great work this. The Haiku is great, but the extra element of thought of fall was perfect. Loved it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

10 Years Ago

Many thanks, Willard!
That's a real unique and appealing way of describing Autumn.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!

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