You Say I'm Bitter, I Say I'm Bleeding

With trembling hands of ice          

The morning bit my will                

For wintry life;                               

My tears streamed fire                    

And I burned. 

Author's Note

A little syllable play, a little different for me.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Perfect.

[Lily Mae]

Oh Haley.. I like this one.. wow.. powerful write.. :) x

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. You said so much in this short poem. The strong ending made the poem complete. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chelsea]

Short and simple, though it speaks volumes. Nicely done :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Short but powerful.

The shorter poetry is, the better they say, with less words making your whole point, I guess you are a master in it. It grabs me. Nicely done.

[Pratik]

that was simple.. yet illuminating ...:)

[BlueDreams]

Very fascinating write though short ....

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

deep thought provoking write. so much in just a few lines. Nicely done.