Nature's Con

A poem I wrote about a year ago when I was going through some hard times with a girl.

life's secret
no one knows
I choose to peek at
the first row
nothing there
first time round
thought it fair
twas already found

last time
question of me
lost rhymes
which you don't see
crazy nights
bleeding eyes
nonstop fights
torrented lies

can't stop now
it's already gone
don't know how
nature's con
life's okay
found it strange
not today
wonders range

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

Love and relationships are always difficult; some more than others. The best thing to do when it doesn't work out (and I think you've at least hinted at it here) is to cut your loses and go on.

[Miss Coral]

Short lines, choppy rhythm, and absolutely perfect for this piece.
Wonderful job. ^_____^

[Ruth]

Impressive work friend!
I adore your scanning of words
Excellent!
xx