MILK

I'm not sorry, let's get that straight here.

Petty words that you aim at me,
Our anger boiling over but yet you still can't see and even an
Umbrella couldn't shield the sadness that pours down on me.
Revenge will be sweet but what will I do?
Elli could help me turn her cat blue?
Don't worry it's harmless.

Then again perhaps not,
Hamsters in the teapot?
Even that wouldn't make me feel better.

Maybe a lion in the bathroom;
Iguanas hanging from the lampshades;
Lots of marbles perhaps, in the vacuum;
Keep it together.

Demons are taking over me,
Only I can hear thier voices;
When will the anger subside?
Not now, revenge will be sweet.

Talking it out?
How will that fix it?
Either way she'll just scream and shout.

So I see now what I have to do,
I'll begin today with my reckless debut.
Now be hushed young sir;
Kindly hand me that carton.

Author's Note

Honestly just a bit of cheeky and immature revenge....yes, this really happened.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

This is one of the best cheeky hissy fits I've ever read, so clever and entertaining. Thanks for the read. Dump that freaking milk. ;)

[Akira]

Haha glad you enjoyed, thank you!

[de_maruf]

great one

[Akira]

Hah, thank you :)

[jwenjwen]

a lion in the bathroom reminded me of the hangover :D
i enjoyed reading.!!

[Akira]

That's great, that's actually where that line came from. Movies are a good inspiration :)

[zainul]

Are you taking the revenge with the carton of milk?
That may be somewhat sweet with lactose,sugar of the milk.

[Akira]

My mom is a coffee addict. I do everything around the house. She gets very cranky with no coffee so I poured the milk down the sink as my revenge for her crappy behaviour towards me. It was immature and totally worth it. I'm a little cheeky, can you tell?

[zainul]

Oh,I understand it now.
The revenge was quite sweet indeed!

[Akira]

:) - It was!

[zainul]

I enjoyed your great idea :)
But,keep it secret.
If your mom can know your role,I can't imagine what may happen!

[Akira]

Oh yes, not something I shall be mentioning.

[zainul]

Take another topic to write another piece.

[Akira]

What do you mean?

[zainul]

You can write a new poem now.

[Akira]

Oh yes, certainly.. just not in the mood just yet :)

[zainul]

You have wonderful poetic talent.
Let me know when you can post a new poem so that I can read and review quickly before anybody else.

[Akira]

Thank you, really appreciate it! I will :)

[zainul]

When you get right mood for writing poem?
Day or night?
Do you have any friend in your school who also write poems or stories?

[Akira]

Usually night is when I write, or very early in the morning. I don't attend school. Nobody I know really writes except my boyfriend.

[zainul]

That is my time of writing too.
Have you finished school?
What is boyfriend doing except writing?

[Akira]

I dropped out to be my mothers full time Carer. Boyfriend likes to play games and read manga and work out. :)

[zainul]

That's ok.
You will get better opportunity later.
I was very curious about your name,'HeartThief'
What is your actual name?

[Akira]

Opportunity for what?
I chose Heart Thief because I seem to captures hearts, either romantically or not. I am a hopeless romantic too. My name is Akira. :)

[zainul]

Opportunity for graduation from a different system as distance or online education/degree.
It looks like a Japanese name.
You can really capture hearts.

[Akira]

I don't really care to graduate. My mother needs full time care so I. Receive payment for doing so and get to spend my days with her so it doesn't bother me much.
The name is in fact a Japanese name, but what is bizarre is that it's a male name. It just sounds very feminine to me so I don't mind none the less.

[zainul]

I know many talented people who were not graduated but their works like poems,novels are very famous.
You may be a famous writer like them someday.
How old is your mother?
Why she needs your full time care?
Would you mind to tell about your father?
Do you attend social gatherings or religious formalities?

[Akira]

My mother is fifty two I believe with various mental illnesses. She's not good with responsibilities or doing things that comes second nature to us such as bathing. I have to make sure she washes herself, remembers to pay bills, cook and clean for her...etc.
I don't know my father, all I know is I don't care to either no matter how hard it's been growing up without one. The reason I say this is because he was abusive to my mother. He punched her in the stomach while pregnant with me, threw my much older sister against a brick wall head first and threw a trash can at the car while they were trying to escape. It's not the only things he's done but I don't care to know him. I hear he lives in the same town as us but I won't go looking for him ever. I've survived without him and I will continue doing so.

I don't do anything religious, with the exception if occasional spiritual fairs in local towns. Stuff like palm reading. I'm not the most social but every year there is two annual fairs I go to (non spiritual) and whatever comes up during the year I seem interested in I'll visit. I do like to visit friends though, not too often though. Why so much curiosity?

[zainul]

I feel great respect for your responsibility to your mother.
Your feeling for a father who is not responsible to his wife and children
is quite appropriate.
I can now imagine how you live in Australia which is far away from my place.
I felt that you were eager to share with me and so I became curious to know your situation.
Hope you are not unhappy for sharing your information.
You may read my poem on the state of a family under a single parent at the following link:
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/zainul/1041753/

[Akira]

Thank you. Australia is beautiful but there are some awful people here too.
I am happy to share to a certain extent I am an open book.
I will read it after I wake but now I must sleep. Goodnight.

[zainul]

Goodnight :)

[zainul]

Your use of open book inspired me to write two verses on your amazing photo.
They are here:read moreYour use of open book inspired me to write two verses on your amazing photo.
They are here:
"This is an angel with the face of doll
She is an open book glorifying the hall"

[Akira]

Aw thanks! :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome
Have you decided not to sleep?
Added to more verses:
"Her black eyes glitter in strange beauty
I may gaze at them for hours as my duty"

[Akira]

Nope still want to sleep, I get notified by my phone if you comment though so if you need me just message. Those are beautiful lines, thank you!

[zainul]

You have to sleep now.
I will complete a poem on you bit by bit and publish in this site when finished.

[Akira]

Thank you, goodnight :)

[zainul]

You are welcome,good girl.
Goodnight :)

[zainul]

She takes care of her old mother
She has no other work to bother

[Akira]

Great :) new writing is up T.T

[zainul]

You have not slept.
However,thanks for appreciation.
It is developing.
It will take some time though to complete.

[Akira]

Nope, can't sleep. I wrote a own about it....

[Akira]

A poem. Autocorrect*

[zainul]

That's great.
I will read it soon.

[Akira]

:)

[zainul]

Let's stop conversation for today :)

[Akira]

Haha, okay.

[zainul]

Goodnight :) Sincerely :)

[zainul]

She has a pain deep inside her heart
Her father left the family to live apart

She dropped herself from school for a sacred mission
To look after her mother as token of love and passion

I adore the girl who really writes wonderful poem
I wish for her a handsome groom and happy home

[zainul]

Now you have the finished piece here:
Passion
A Poem by zainul
"
This is a real story of a passionate girl
"

This is an angel with the face of doll
She is an open book glorifying the hall

Her black eyes glitter in strange beauty
I may gaze at them for hours as my duty

She takes care of her old mother
She has no other work to bother


She has a pain deep inside her heart
Her father left the family to live apart

She dropped herself from school for a sacred mission
To look after her mother as token of love and passion

I adore the girl who really writes wonderful poem
I wish for her a handsome groom and happy home
You can read it here:

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/zainul/1089886/

[zainul]

You may read it in my website www.connecttask.com at this link:

http://connecttask.com/blog/2012/12/16/passion-a-poem-by-dr-syed-md-zainul-abedin/
Besides, you may find it in LinkedIn,Facebook,twitter and pinterest.