SLEEP

A Poem by Akira

Wide awake, can't sleep;
The world on my shoulders I keep.
How I wish my dreams would take me captive.
I planned for this poem to be longer,
But my need to sleep is stronger.

© 2012 Akira

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zainul

Well done.
There is good even in the worst.
You missed sleep for some time,the world got a great poem in return.
Congratulations!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Thank you :)

13 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

Jeff Bresee

I just love short and simple. Nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago

13 Years Ago

Thanks, me too... Especially when tired! Hehe

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Added on December 16, 2012
Last Updated on December 16, 2012

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Akira

Adelaide, SA, Australia

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Hi, I'm Akira and I'm 26 years old and I'm from Australia. Writing is a creative expression for me but it's not one that I'm very open about as it doesn't come naturally. I don't write often, but w.. more..