A DRINK BETWEEN FRIENDS

I recently decided to try dating again. This was the end result.

A drink between friends;

A confident smile she pretends.

A friendship broken;

A new love woken.

A note between friends;

A new love ends.

A flowers final petal drops to the floor;

A beautiful flower she won't be anymore.

Reviews

[JordanLane]

And when one poem ends another one begins

[Akira]

That would have been wonderful as the last line in this. Wonderful. :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Wow, this is really difficult to interpret, but I guess at least have to try. Something like some friends drank some spirits and then the demons took over their bodies and got into a fight? Or maybe when the girl drank the spirits, the real demons in her came out and she is not a princess anymore.

[Akira]

What an interesting interpretation. I really love your thought process with what you think. Incorrect, but very lovely to read.

[Akira]

But for your benefit: It's about two people sharing a drink together, she's nervous but smiles, pretending she's confident. They fall in love, therefore breaking their friendship. The second part is where she receives a note, informing her that he doesn't want to be with her anymore. She struggles for awhile and then all her love turns to hatred. She's on breaking point and suicides. She was a flower, but now she lays cold on the floor, dead.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Wow, that is really impressive.

[Akira]

Thank you very much! :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Did she kill herself because she had psychological trauma of people telling her she was so pretty and she wanted more attention by trying to escape death as a game thinking she could come back by manifesting herself in persons memories.