Swimming

I <3 swimming so much. This is just a poem about how swimming makes me feel.

When I'm swimming

I feel like a

graceful butterfly

free to do anything

when I go down

the water slide

when the water

hits my face

like a cool breeze

on a hot

summers day

I feel so free

to do

what I want

 

 

Reviews

[Max]

I love this. The poem you have written here is simple, and has been written from your true feelings. I admire your ability to be able to write things that are so simple

[Review]

Some poems are so serious these days, and that's okay. but it is refreshing to read a simple, relaxing poem without dark undertones and deeper meanings. good job! I like swimming too!

[J. Ghalden]

Smooth and to the point. I liked it. :)