Lightning (A poem by my teacher)

This a poem that my TEACHER wrote. He dosn't have an acount on here so I offered to publish it for him and give him the reviews.

Lightning

Twisting zipping

Shards of yellow glass

Flying through

The night time sky

Is it Zeus?

Throwing his bolt

In a darkened mass?

 

Lightning

It follows

A thunderous quake

It sits and waits-

A flash of white light-

The earth does shake

 

Lightning

A million volts-

So it seems

A flash of white light-

Shadows thrown

Jagged lines of beams

Author's Note

Please don't adress the comments to me; adress them to my teacher.

Reviews

[Rocknroll821]

WriteWiz99: It's Mr Moore. Don't you remember when he showed it in class?

[WriteWiz99]

Thats one good poem for a teacher, who is he/she?

[doggylover65201]

awesome

[Helpless]

great imagery through out the whole thing

[Max]

Dear Teacher, this poem is very good. I love the imagery as well as the mention of Zeus.

[J. Ghalden]

To Mr. Teacher Guy: Very nice poem, I liked the imagery it gave. (( I'm not too sure myself, but isn't it Zeus who throws the lightning bolts? O.o )) Besides that, very good.