Moon and sun.

"When the moon and the sun switch place, for you my heart will no longer race."

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

It's beautiful, but if they switch places, we will literally fall off the Earth and be sucked into the gravitational pull of the sun!! Ouch... : ) Everyone will melt into one gooey person. xoxo -Mark

[Kelsey]

So short, yet so beautiful. Amazing job. I think it'd be a great idea to go further with this and extend it. Either way, lovely idea and lovely poem. (:

[Steven Cash]

Very nice

[Sami Khalil]

This is a nice poem. Well penned...

[Antonio Valentino]

terrific line, loved it

nicely done!
:)

[Kaylor Mason]

That is elegance in a beautiful verse!