Irreverently Poetry

an amusing little ditty - done in fun and very tongue in cheek :)

Have you heard the world is flat?
So what do you think about that?
It could explain why no-one's here,
they fell off the edge, or so I fear!

And evolution never happened.
Darwin's theories? All flattened!
The dinosaurs, just one great joke,
Old bones buried to just confuse folk.

Our world created all new and sleek.
God must have been very bored that week!
Each perfect critter standing tall,
I'm amazed he had the time at all?

Each day when I crawl out of bed,
the sound of nature rings in my head.
Not so blind that I can not see,
Evolution working all around me!

Reviews

[Heavenly Scent]

Irreverent poetry m'dear - although it could well be irrelevant too :)

Thank you all for your kind comments - I rather enjoyed writing it too!

[Rambling Prose]

Although I don't agree with the concept of this piece; it's certainly well written & rather entertaining! Who says that poetry can't be funny?! Irrelevant poetry about a irrelevant theory! (giggles) Just teasing you along...

~still smiling~

[Enigma]

Amusing!! Very amusing indeed!! I had a broad grin on my face all the while I was busy reading your poem.
The first two verses are my favourite.They're the most funny ones too, atleast for me!!
Great Write!!! *still grinning*

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Good write, thank you for sharing, debileah