Moon

Moon

A Poem by Noah
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this is how i feel about the sky and what happens when i look up.

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The moon shines luminously like it knows me and what happened to me 
Like it knows me 
Wrapping the obsidian sky with diamonds in a blanket around me 
It’s white yolky roundness shines down 
And I’d spend all night on the roof curling my fingers around it as if to hold it as my own
Knight, queen, king and prince
The moon is my royalty and ‘neath it’s presence i feel whole 
Holy, even 
The moon shines luminously like it’s my friend and mother 
And my father and my lover 
It warms my heart and I’d reach up into the sky, grab it and kiss it like 
It’s my very own
Love….
i love the moon 
Shining luminously like it knows me and what happened to me

© 2025 Noah


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This is a lovely poem Noah. I'm feeling that lunar love with you even more after reading this. Well done. There is a song named Reflection by a band named Tool that I think you will find more insightful than the rest of us. (this particular version I think will interest you. Particularly. www.youtube.com/watch?v=ank7ygBwI0o

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Thank you, Davidgeo. I just recently watched the music video, ‘Reflection’, and it was quite captivating. I loved how the tendrils of the human brain were “pining away” (get the reference?) and yearning for the moon’s presence. The lyrics felt similarly to my poem in almost every way possible! Thanks for interesting this to me. I now have a new favorite song.

Posted 7 Months Ago


This is a lovely poem Noah. I'm feeling that lunar love with you even more after reading this. Well done. There is a song named Reflection by a band named Tool that I think you will find more insightful than the rest of us. (this particular version I think will interest you. Particularly. www.youtube.com/watch?v=ank7ygBwI0o

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What do you do for a living? Just curious.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your work is absolutely remarkable, and I will love to help to bring it to life through story art and animation and also i can help you to reach a broader audience. Do you have any other social media account when we can connect? you can find me on this Telegram: @Yaroslava_6ixyes or discord: @yaroslava70

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 12, 2025
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Noah
Noah

Chicago, IL



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I am a very cool person and love to create poems about the different depressing themes in my life. more..