The long and the short of it

Short thoughts from this morning's walk

I can't dance, got no beat,
My mind don't connect to my feet.
But I got mine, it is within,
Comes out in poetic rhythm

Reviews

[rew]

this is good - it reads like mine and a lot of others should be read - syllable by syllable and yours as such with its ending of ' rith-him is of the best - and there it is, as you said - the beat is within.
regards from rew

[barleygirl]

Being a hardcore Eric Clapton fan, I often listen to his music before writing & pray: "please let me write the way he caresses those strings!" Immersing myself in the musicality is a big part of what I love about writing (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[John the Baptist]

Which is a lot more dependable than the rhythm method.

[emmajoy]

Laughing! Your muse amuses, Helen.. plus has a brain via your thoughts! Walking does release a few this and thats, doesn't it, especially if a cuppa waits for you. Take care, keep safe.

[Helen]

Love it made you laugh. It was meant to be light but also acceptance. I am who I am! And there's definite plusses to that even if I can't dance.

Yes, I start a thousand poems in my head on my morning walk ... The challenge is then to remember them. Thank you for the review

[emmajoy]

You're very welcome, need a smile these days.. we all do at times. .