Eveyday

I'm sane....for today.

 

Everyday 

Sitting alone in this room

I begin to cry

Cry away the pain

The insane day I just faced

I pick up my escape

One swift movement and i'm gone

Away,

just in a daze

I need it 

this place 

this maze

Of nothingness, yet it fills me

With what

I cant explain

Just know its enough to keep me sane

Sane for another day. 

Reviews

[Jordan]

When you sit and count 1 minute it seems to take forever which makes it that much crazier that 24 hours goes by so quickly and with seemingly little results. I lost track of life a loooong time ago. Whether or not that was before the insanity is up for debate. But this reminds me of when I was 17(which feels like a century ago to me despite it only being a couple years) I had no clue how to make it through the day. Honestly I would've beet you a million dollars I wouldn't live this long back then.

tl;dr Life's crazy, bruh.

[Ella]

I'm glad you did make it this far. I know i'll make it for many more years, if the lord permits, but that doesn't mean i really want me. Thanks for the review it means a lot! Yes life is crazy.

[Urja Gokani]

honestly speaking i love emotional poem and i loved this piece of writing too amazingly written keep it up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Ella]

Thank you, ill try my best.

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our pain captured and lost in another cut...a single swift swipe of the blade allows us to slip into that 'maze' where we can't even find ourselves... wherein we find sanity in the forgotten insanity of our reality... well-done, Ella

[Ella]

I tried to describe the feeling but i couldn't seem to find the right words...so instead i compared it to a maze which seems to fit nicely.

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yes, I am sure there is no way to really describe it and I think you did a wonderful job with your comparison...

[Ella]

Thank you.