Moon's Decay

Moon's Decay

I bloom, I bloom

I fly away

I land, I land

and cry away

The sorrow from my yesterday

the day that came from the

Moon's Decay,

will give me life

for another day.

Author's Note

Sorry I haven't posted in a while.

Reviews

[cloud]

This seems to be another way of writing about depression although you do not list it as one of your tags. I interpret it it as one who experiences a bout of happiness only to land in the same sad place as before. A full moon is a beautiful thing for one who is flying high in a joyful sense, but its decay foreshadows a landing that is soon to come.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
beautiful.........absolutely loved it!!!
:)

[Ella]

Thank you. Happy to hear you loved it!

[Brian M. Peeples]

Wow. That was exquisitely crafted! I deeply and sincerely enjoyed reading this poem!

[Ella]

Thanks for the review super glad to hear you liked it! Hope you have an amazing day!

[Robert]

Nice Rhythm to this piece Ella. I enjoy reading your work.

[Chris]

Very lyrical tones and rhythm

[Ella]

Thank you!

[Drcicarlo]

Beautiful dictation as well as your style. Sounds like an adult's lullaby. You clearly are a talented artist. Simplicity and reality are a breathtaking combination.

[Ella]

Thank you for the sweet review. i thought i was a little rusty since i haven't written in a while. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[Drcicarlo]

Keep it up! I can't emphasize enough how much talent you have. I look forward to seeing more art from you.