Darkest Friend

Sometimes your darkest friend and your closest friend are the same.

So we meet again?

I guess I should call you my friend.

for every night with no end,

you grin and come in.

Oh you marvelous being

with little to no feeling.

"How do you do?"

it sticks like glue

and makes you feel like you have no clue

which way to turn.

and just so you'll learn

he'll poke and he'll yearn.

Until you give in

and accept that he wins.

Because he is the one that you'll always trust

for he thinks and he knows,

that you're always alone.

So don't be a fool,

and don't try to play it cool.

For he is around.

and he knows everything now.

Author's Note

I haven't written in a while so forgive me if it isn't my best.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

This is freaky and entertaining at the same time. Very engaging, and very well written! The two subtle pop culture references made me chuckle were marvellously placed. Much enjoyed!

[Just Kim]

This is so very well written, I really enjoyed this.
It flows very nicely

[BlackPrince]

This is a nice poem. There is a certain air of mystery to it, in my opinion. Since all readers have varying perception, I'll dare say that this poem seems more like about a lover than a friend, in my opinion.
Either way, a lover can be our best friend, or good friends can be good friends without any sexual connotation.
Nice Poem!
Well done girl!

[KCthelastboyscout]

Sounds like your friend is depression or something close to it. This is a unique way of writing your story and I enjoyed it very much

[Omikron]

I really liked it! I also like how you didn't follow the same writing pattern throughout the poem, and were creative with your writing. Great!

[Usman Muhammad]

A very well written poem.
You have illustrated the friendship in a beautiful way.
Please keep writing and I will be looking forward to read your other writings.