Love Lost

A poem about a boy who lost his chance at love

A boy so young and so naive, 

didn't know what love could mean.

So when it finally came his way,

He let it go,

And it slipped away.

He tried so hard to get it back,

But learned that tears don't fix holes or cracks. 

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

So simple but yet so true and meaningful. Great job!

[Ella]

Thank you! :)

[emipoemi]

Brava! Short and powerful! Very relatable. Well done!

[Ella]

Thank you! :)

[BrittBratBroski]

Wow! Short and sweet. I definitely can relate to this in my own life. I love how you organized the stanza, as well. It flowed very smoothly. Overall an amazing piece!

[Ella]

Thank you so much! I originally had this written on my old phone, which is beyond gone, luckily it popped back into my head tonight!