Countless Miles

I decided I wanted to start writing poetry so here is an early attempt. They don't have it, but this is in the form of a tanka

From so far away

Through lengths of fields and forests

I lay inebriated

For even countless miles fail

To sober me from your grace

Reviews

[KAin]

I don't often see tanka poetry, but this is very nicely done.
I never seem to have the right words to try one of these myself, so I usually only ever try the format of the haiku, which I find easier.
I'd be interested to see more of this type of poetry, though!
Great work!

[Neon]

It does work, Vincent! It's a nice "tanka" .. There're very few people, I've seen, who write "tankas" but I read this one and it takes me away to the world of memories where I see the past old time through the haze of my mind some happiest or memorable moments of the life. Nice work!

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)................