Without Falling

A shape poem.... though the shape is kind of wonky. :{D (They're supposed to be wings, but it's really hard to get them to be!)

You light                                                                               up my
day, and                                                                      free me
in the night. You                                   hold me close
and never let go. You                         don’t keep me wait-
ing and you never will,                               for when we’re together,
the space in my heart, it does       fill. You keep your mind open
always letting me in. You’re kind                                    and you’re special, unique, and
a friend. I rely on you and I know                     you’ll always try to help and never
let me down. You light up my              life, and you make my wings
so I can reach the  top without falling

Author's Note

Sorry if they don't look like wings, this is my first shape poem, and it's a lot harder than it looks! :{D

Reviews

[Aarea]

Oh your wings are great!!! I can't do shape poems at all! I had an assignment to make one once and I ended up doing tic tac toe and it like had like four lines with three words each. Oops. :)

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oh! thats' so cool and neat i see them wings oh yeah! let's fly hinoglue! :)

[emma]

i can totally see how its wings. and the poem was really well written and had an easy flow. great work:)