Moonshine

My mate Moonshine loves when I play guitar for her. This is how I'll repay her for listening whenever I'm feeling alone.

As your flaky eyelashes flutter, Moonshine,
The moon you gaze at begins to dance.
Your eyes shimmer and your beating heart paints a line,
Creating a message that puts me in a trance.

From your ruby lips, words spill and I heed,
"Love comes as easy as a new craving,
But grows into something like a need.
No longer fall in love and begin misbehaving."

As your scarlet heart pounds faster, Moonshine,
The sky you gaze at begins to smile.
Your fingers tingle and our minds intertwine,
"I was always sure this was worthwhile."

Author's Note

What'd you think?

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was cute and passionate. I really think it was good. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Shin]

Creative and passionate, nice title, can't beat it, it's great, nice job, I liked it.

[Kia-chan!]

This is the sort of poem that puts the reader ina trance....Very good. I like your use of vocabulary, and also the name of the poem. Good work :)

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gosh that's lovely, flowing perfectly..nicely penned

[deeps]

This is so lovely, i enjoyed this write.

[nono]

Awww beautiful! loved it!

[ShaneBerry]

love is an addiction lol very creative use of vocabulary