Death

The poem gives a description about the bitter fact of life. What are the various outcomes of every act that you perform in your life.

Oh death !!!
Be kind!!!
To the ones awaiting you,
on their cold beds.
Moaning by the glories of their past,
Reciting stories of regrets,
That finally outcast.

Let them recall,
Deeds performed,
Under the illusions of,
tentative minds.
Or may them yearn before thy,
for mercy,
While you decline the plead,
Like a witnessing blind.

That unheard knocks,
At the heaven's door,
Comes as the fallouts,
of sins Impure.
The torments at the boiling hell,
Are the curses that acts so well.

They run, to hide,
From door to door,
Still land in a mine,
Without a cure!

The time once claimed
To a good man
to walk on the paths of,
divinity!
And then came a time,
who slaughtered his soul,
To make him face,
All his avoided calamities.

They ceased him to death,
Before he could run,
And dragged him to world
unknown,
A world where only pain,
Survives.
Where millions come
and millions are gone!

Author's Note

Kindly tell me what you think about the poem. Would he grateful for your reviews and suggestions. Thanks a ln ocean.

Reviews

[_Hanabi_]

A very lovely poem.
The first stanza basically telling the Grim Reaper to be kind to the sickly (the ones ready to go) who are just laying their hanging on by a thread, reminiscing
about the great things of there past lives and regretting so many others.

The Second stanza stating how they remember things they have done, yet still uncertain about them and how to let the dying beg to the Grim Reaper to spare them even though he will never even listen to there requests.

The third stanza clearly states that as much as they beg and plead to be taken to heaven when they die, it won't happen because of all the sins they committed during life and that hell awaits with firey torture for those

The fourth stanza implies that as much as they try to run and hide from the Reaper, they're only going in circles, it is of no use

The fifth stanza says that there was once a time they were all good people with righteous ways but eventually there came the time when they began sinning to face all the sudden distress they came there way

The final stanza states how they were caught before they could even hide and the Reaper has taken them to a desolate place where they would only no suffering and pain , a place where many come and go