Survivor

Survivor

I'm trapped in darkness
I fight my own way,
Passed all the bloody forest,
I came out alive,

I'm thirsty and hungry
Only starving to death
All I have to eat worms woods and fish from sea,
I am survivor

I hunt food in daytime
Suffered from pain,
Restless day and night
I will make it happen

I faced leopards and anacondas,
Fighting for my life
Making my dreams alive
Passed all the dangers in life

I have broken down
But I stand up taller,
This will be redemption
Blood on my face,

I heard no man survive
From these horrible moment
I'm a survivor and I will make it happen today.

You watched me bleed,
I have come all the way
You don't see the last of me
I am a survivor.

Reviews

[wordman]

sounds like you had a hell of a time,great write

[NWC]

Very motivating and inspiring. Now I feel like writing something like this.

[Hiroshi Masters]

thank you!

[Hiroshi Masters]

thank you!

[Celie Rose]

You are so talented. You words are deep and full of emotion. Keep up the good work. Good job

[Hiroshi Masters]

Thank you so much! Im glad you enjoy it

[William Gardner]

good. raw. "I aint gonna quit... Avoid poisonous snakes" do you need it?
best line is I will make it happen today, maybe deserves its own line?