Wall Of Words

This is a personal poem since I was dealing with family and friends. This helps me out and release my emotions.

The Wall Of Words

I was broken down
Words on my walls,
Everyone says about me
Nasty words in my life

I have ignored them
They can't leave me alone,
My mind full of doubts
I'm drowned with words,

Sinking down below,
Lies beneath the ocean floor
I couldn't stand the pain
It hurts deep inside of me,

I want to catch my breath,
Cannot reach the surface
They want to see me down,
I'm still standing strong

I need to escape from pain
That scars won't remain,
Everything turns foggy
I cannot see my road

Every day I feel lost
There's no sunshine,
My dreams are broken
All the words killing me

I never listen what they say
My emotions are bottled up,
I am stuck in frustrations
Thinking they know me
But they're so wrong

Why breaking me down,
They don't know me?
Why judging me?
I tried to be who I am
They will never like me

You don't have to hate me
Your nasty and bitter words
Will never last long,
I ripped every single out
Finally found my dream

A path that leads home
Where I see sun set again
You won't stop me today
Now I stepped into the light

Your empty words vanished
You won't hurt me to life
Because I am stronger,
Thank you for making me
Become better,

I am moving on without you
I am not your prisoner,
Chains unlocked my wrist
I am set free forever

You won't see me fall
Wall of words are over
They can't stop me anymore.

Reviews

[Amy R]

brilliant write!
keep it up!

[Celie Rose]

It is a real struggle to do what is right. Continue to stand firm with who you are.
"Wall of words are over
They can't stop me anymore."
Well written.

[Hiroshi Masters]

yes its a battle for me but these words never hurt me

[Hiroshi Masters]

yes its a battle for me but these words never hurt me

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the story of the journey in the words.
"I am moving on without you
I am not your prisoner,
Chains unlocked my wrist
I am set free forever "
Hard to find freedom. But when we have it. We will appreciate freedom. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Insight "MH"]

Nice build up, from being someone with a hurt broken heart to a strong fighting spirit. Thank you for sharing. Insight

[Laura S-C]

It was a well written poem, well done. It was also very emotional you did a good job at showing that emotion in the poem.

[Hiroshi Masters]

thank you so much

[wordman]

a great write my friend,sad how people can make you feel !

[Hiroshi Masters]

thank you so much!