Statues

Statues

I can't move my body
We're statues standing
Nothing to do here,
Old and rusty cemented

As rain pour onto my head
A lonely broken heart
My love will never seperate us
Our face looking blank
We are like frozen statues

I battle to keep love alive
A moon started to shine
We come back to life,
I feel your heart beating

You'll never be alone,
Dreaming that love will last
We will keep it together
Make it stronger than ever,

I don't want to let you go
Because my heart is for you
My time will come
Before we turn back to statues,

I will be there for you
Our life will never change
I will never forget you,
You'll remain in my heart

When I'm left with cracks
You left me stranded alone
My tears started to falling
Into my cheeks,

I wish I could touch you
Let you hold me right,
I'm still living in a dream
You're what I want in my life

I will never leave you alone
Keep you in my mind
Our love remain stronger
Forever in my heart always

I promise you tonight
I will keep you in prayers
We're statues falling in love
Don't leave me tonight.

Author's Note

I am open to criticism. Give me a few tweaks I needed to work on?

Reviews

[Kieran]

Only critic i have is you use the same few words on the end of some sentences, maybe try and mix it up a bit :) other than that great read

[Hiroshi Masters]

Thank you for feedback. I will edit this piece again