Love

Such a fragile thing.
Wraps you around with its warmth.
A wonderful feeling.
Shared by two.
Such a fragile thing.
It starts to crack.
It fades away.
Pain is felt.
Death is caused.

Such a fragile thing..

 

Author's Note

Review please.

Reviews

[George Love]

Wow! This is a hard hitting powm with tons of meaning dealt in few words. Excellent work.

[Tomi]

i'm more of the school of thought that love is more than how we feel, but on the creative side, i'm impressed with the literary skill brought to bear here. it's short and on point.

[Jeff]

Great write and very true in every sense.

[mamabear]

Very powerful. Nicely written. Sharing for sharing your work.
I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Love

Mamabear x

[Misty Blue Eyes]

WOW sad but i liked it

[Marie Harrison]

What a powerful write. Sometimes this is true.

[hannahspelledbackwards]

It's so short and yet it says so much. Love is the most beautiful feeling in the world. It forgives and covers a multiple of sins. Love is pure and genuine. When taken away, it's as if a hole has taken the place of it. You feel like you've died to yourself.
I really love this poem; great write :)

[Angela Mulley]

Thanks for sharing this, great write!

[Christopher.Holmberg]

mhmm

[Geralyn Miller]

Love can be both delicate and of incredible strength; romantic love is extremely fragile in the beginning and but be treated with care, like a new plant in the garden. you take extra care until it is deeply rooted. Some new plants will not survive, like some love; you must plant a more suitable plant in it's place.