Tainted Paint

I honestly am in a state of loss
This road..I'm unable to cross
Far away lies what's colorless
Waiting to be colored by our awareness

Long eyelashes dipped in paint
Souls covered with taint
Lying colorless..
Our awareness..
Mixing paint with taint
The great outcome
 

Author's Note

Review please.

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

It speaks to me of a story. I can see the road ahead of me waiting to be touched with the rain of my hopes and colors. Beautiful. You have a way with words.

-youoweyoupay

[Mauricio Montoya]

its got flow like how it comes together, nice work.

[Erin]

Very pretty and simple.