'Intuitive Heart'

Things we see, things we feel, things we yearn for.. All this can be summed up by yours, an intuitive heart.

Sensitive is the crime of her heart,

Still distant shores resurrect her ash..

Bleeding frost on her misty soul

Things I crave are forever lost

Just as well...

We leave the past and open the soul

As we find new ways to bare ourselves

No more sojourning on a strange land,

Forgetting all we are..

It's time we make this place our home

Destiny is calling    out       to                    me....

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

The heart certainly is a fragile, and delicate thing, and that's why we sometimes guard it.
This poem was full of emotion and meaning, and it really was quite beautiful.
great poem Brian :)

[brian]

Thank you so much Kimmy.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

*cimmy*
Your welcomes

[Ruth]

This is so beautifully woven Brian, the heart is a fragile tool and powerful guide...graceful and inviting poem :)

[brian]

Thank you so much.. I am very glad you liked it, and that it connected with you. I wanted to make this poem just as sensitive as the poet's heart is... treading tranquilly and ever-so-lightly upon the waters of our lives.. . (=

[Ruth]

You achieved the mission :) Most welcome Brian...