My ABC song...

I have some loyal people...but then.

A B C D E F G

Why are my friends betraying me?

they say they care, and try to play fair

So why am I still crying here?

tucked in a corner, wishing it away

They said they loved me

but.... Do they?

Author's Note

I'm not too good at poems, but I gave it try. Tell me what you think

Reviews

[Michelle Coleman]

I think you did a great job. 😊 I even found myself singing along.

Eventfully there comes a time in all of our lives when we must evaluate where we stand among those we call friends. Ask ourselves if our souls sing when among them or do we feel ourselves die?

Then we make choices...

[Avagarey]

very true, and thank you. the lining up with the original beats of the song weren't very intentional, so i'm happy. #Bandgeek

[Jamestown]

I think you did a fine job, friends come and go, God is forever, cling
to his friendship, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Avagarey]

Thanks! You too!