Backward Feet

Backward Feet

A Poem by Holly O'Brien
"

just heartbreak sometimes...

"
It was so close
It was so clear
So near
I could taste it on the air

But somehow
It slipped away
and I found myself
counting the days

I miss before
I'm worn from after
I miss your smile
I miss your laughter

But between the anger
and between the sadness
there lies a hurt
and it's like madness

I'm letting my heart
remember you
but it's the last thing
in the world I wanna do...

© 2010 Holly O'Brien


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Wow….a smorgasbord..
Of very delicate emotions…
You trapped them in appropriate words…
Lovely….
Touching……


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh I know that feeling so well Yossi

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on May 13, 2010
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Holly O'Brien
Holly O'Brien

Macon, Georgia



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Well I was born and raised in Nassau, Bahamas but I currently reside in Macon, Georgia where I attend college (IT major). Writing has always been my passion and it always will be. A very good friend .. more..