Alice

A love so deadly

She is an enchanting beauty

That sneaks its way

Into your heart

And plays with your mind

 

Her name is Alice

And she knows her skills

She aims for the kill

With her deadly weapon

 

Heart cold as ice

Behind those slanted eyes

She is as innocent as...

Death

 

You reach out to her

And she embraces you

 

You are trapped by her words

You are screwed from the start

 

Her sex is like magic

Fulfilling every fantasy

Making you scream from within

This girl is mine

 

But her mind is a counter top

The meal will soon be cleared

 

She leaves you stunned

And you are left broken

 But she is not fazed

She’s only enacting

 

Your mind is tossing

Your pulse has weakened

 

Alice will be sorry

 

You don’t even feel yourself

Loading the barrel

 

You don’t even feel yourself

Squeezing her life away

If I can’t have you

Then no one will

 

At least thank Alice

For showing you how to love

Reviews

[JENY]

Wow…wonderful….
Love being looked upon…
From a different angle…
Its bold….and upright.
I liked it…

[Tomás Ó C..]

Quite a twist at the end...

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

Interesting twist & turn of events. Sounds like this poem might be a good candidate for a short screenplay. I like the lines: "But her mind is a counter top ... The meal will soon be cleared." The ending although deadly is quite poetic in places..

[Clemmy]

great... wow