Senseless Distance

I want to look into your eyes..

To acquire this vibe

How a WISDOM mind   tantalize

O’ so Closely knit ;do you smell of TIDES?

As we deeply COLLIDE

AS IN NATURALISTIC

just  realize…

 

Expressionistic Tone shook drums of an always listening ear

ASSURED lovely exchanges made it easier (an easy ear)

To be clear..

I WANT YOU NEAR!

Author's Note

You ever felt this way about a certain someone you wanted to be closer too?

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you for the authors note i always look there first.And yes i have felt that way beforew,Some follow me still

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautiful rhyming..........lovely verse.

[Honey54]

Thank Hun I always appreciate you artistic views

[Cassie Fraga]

oooohhhh yes!!! and you expressed BEAUTIFULLY!!! the whole piece came together perfectly, the emotion, the depth, the format,... true talent right hea!!
GREAT WORK!!!

[Everett DeValle]

Beautiful poetry, Honey...I felt the longing from your lovely flow...your words magnificently blended well in your rhyme scheme.