UNTITLED

just a quick write not finised

Ears ringing, Eyes burning, nose stuffy…

Pain seeping through my skin like a sponge..

I knew this day…would arrive..here it comes

Just too soon.

Bring the heat like Summers June.

But your…

Cooler than a breeze on a beachy afternoon

We have marched to our own beat, but we’re so in tuned

 

I can wipe all night but THEY would never be dry; these eyes

Seen it all, these ears :endured sweet lies…

Trying to defeat deceit, analyzing an open book; but your never easy to read.

 

I accepted you Love and felt relieved, but I felt like it was something I need, and

It ended up making me naïve.

Author's Note

this is a quick write , all opinions are welcomed i feel it need a lil more...

Reviews

[rose]

this is so good and sadly, so true for many of us.

[Everett DeValle]

Love is like that...it ends as quickly as it begins, in slow despondent phases...just remember the memories...lovely description throughout...the beginning sentences sounded like my annual allergies. :)

Beautiful spontaneous write, Honey.

[Honey54]

Thankyou Hun, ur always here to support my writing

[Everett DeValle]

You are very welcome, Honey. :)