You Deserve More

This is a poem for Nixie.

 

You need lazy Sunday mornings

Lounging in bed with somebody special

Bringing you a cup of tea with a smile

Only for you.

 

You warrant more than a passing glance
Or an occasional call when it’s convenient.

You need soft whispers and seductive giggles

Only for you.

 

You merit sun filled summer days

Complete with cool breezes

And lingering glances

Only for you.

 

You’ve earned passionate nights

Filled with eager kisses and

Urgent groping hands

Only for you.

 

You deserve so much more.

 

 

Reviews

[boneman]

A wonderful Poem, moved me as well.

You must truly be a wonderful friend to say all of those nice things. Doesn't everyone deserve all the wonderful things life and love can bring? Sometimes we are really lucky and find what we deserve in life.

The peaceful safe arms of a lover in comfort and desire. The long slow summer days loving and watching the world go by without a care in the world......A heart filled with such love and the desire to give without expecting anything in return.

As Mary Chapin Carpenter once said "Shouldn't I have this shouldnt I have all of this?"

You continue to grow as a poet expressing your emotions and love so beautifuly and eloquently.

Peace etc

Boneman

[Kathryn Star, Shine!]

A wonderful write to a friend. You must be the most loving person in the world. I can't say enough about how well you write, and how you communicate so easily with the audience. What a wonderful person you are... and I truly mean it. KS

[fireblossom]

I like this one too.

There are folks who can write well, but to write with depth of heart takes a person of substance. I am thinking you are one of those people. I will continue to read you with interest.

[Collect-Eye]

I wonder if anyone achieves this..someone alway f***s it up at some point.

[Constance L. Hartwell]

You are preaching to the choir. This was a beautifully written piece that many will be able to relate to. I wish I had someone to bring me tea on sunday mornings! I'm not bitter though :) Great write.

[Anastasia Starlena]

beautiful piece. takes your mind on a sweet journey of love.
captivating.

[Big ol' Kahuna]

Your heart is more beautiful than any string of words could ever pretend to be. Reaching out your heart to a friend on any level such as this is a very special and wonderful trait; I am proud of you.

As for Nixie or anyone else out there with a heartache happening, keep the faith. What would this life be like without the low times? We wouldn't feel the high ones. While heartache sucks, it always gets better. Always!

Good job lady Honeypot.

[Flow~]

Need, warrant, merit, earned and deserve, I like these words that you used, it shows a give and take in order to get to the deserve parts. Some feel entitled and confuse that feeling with being deserving when they are totally different. I really like this one~

[visions of doom]

tis a beautiful poem by a beautiful poet , every accolade richly deserved , be proud of yourself , it is a brilliant job ye have done here .

[Kelley]

you tell her....smiles
I think we all deserve this! lol
but to no avail ......smiles
thanks for sharing and Nixie is a great person.

Kelley

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

Very cool write.

This is the voice of a kind-hearted and true friend. It's hard to see someone you care about and revere not get all the good things that you think they deserve. Especially when that person doesn't seem to know that they deserve all those wonderful things...as the best of us often don't.

Like the construction and flow of the piece and the infectious joy behind the word choices. I really enjoy reading your stuff.

Cheers!
G