Reborn Mother

It'll make sense when you read it...

He pushed her away

Told her to die

Said he didn't need her

Said she was wasn't needed now

She ran away that night

Leaving her little girl with him

And ran until she hit the cliff

Then jumped to end her life

It may seem strange

To hear it now

From the little girl

Who lost her mom

I would know

For that was my mother

Who ended her life

Because of my father

My mom may be dead

But I live every day

For I know I am

Her reincarnated form

Author's Note

So tell me, should I write more to this, or make this into a story?

Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

I agree with Silver Shadow, you could easily make this into an epic poem or a longer story, it has enough backstory in these lines alone to have the makings of a true story. Excellent x

[Hope Rose]

I never thought really of continuing it into a story. Would you be willing to cowrite it if I decided to make it a story?

[BlaqkShadow]

Sounds good :) I have 2 jobs so I am on and offline but I always come back :D Did you have a plan?

[Hope Rose]

I dont really know that's why i havent continued it but i was thinking of something in the daughter's point of view

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

I think you should do both, love it

[Hope Rose]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome, it is amazing