My Immortal

My life seems endless

When I'm with you

I feel as though

We'll live forever together

If I ever forget

There will be those times

So I'll say it now

And for all eternity

I love you

Reviews

[annalysiar]

Passionate and raw great write

[Hope Rose]

Thanks I'm glad you like it

[annalysiar]

Welcome. I'm glad to have read it, great poem

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

so beautiful.....................love this poem..................