A lonely woman can write about her lover on valentine's day. She can describe his most endearing traits line upon line upon line-- as if...he existed.
A young girl can share her deepest erotic thoughts, demonstrating an ability to take the reader's hand and guide them with her words, leaving them satiated-- but only if she's skilled enough.
For those depressed and those searching to release their pain-- It's a bloodletting.
They've been raped, they've been bullied, ignored and even wounded. The dark side held them too long.
They need you to listen or simply just notice they're alive. They may wonder if writing is all a fruitless endeavor when their written cries for help go unnoticed.
But behind poetry's walls...
A man can offer us a character, from a fictitious town that resembles trees, sidewalks, roads and even paths of his own treasured youth.
An adolescent can share a broken heart with a seemingly invisible world. He/she can release all the angst, tear by tear, until the poem has ended-- for now.
Poetry is a haven for ideas, rants, memories or thoughts that otherwise would go unheard by most. The family simply wouldn't understand.
It is a platform for those skilled or unskilled; for those confident and those apprehensive; for those that standout and those whose computer is their only escape.
Some here, have painstakingly learned poetry has its elements: meter, rhyme, metaphor, and more. As for others, form, cadence, line breaks... are all unimportant.
The prolific and the obscene; those with morals and those without; religious; atheists... they're all involved.
People have left poetry for greener pastures, only to re-emerge days, weeks, or even years later when the writer needed another ear to listen to all he/she wanted to say.
It is a source of frustration, joy and confusion, all mentioned into one place.
It is your yesteryear, your today, and all your tomorrows.
It's a percentage of your life, your time and your thoughts. It consists of creation and destruction.
It's a statement; it's a confession. It's a voice that understands; It's a disciplinarian that doesn't. It's a welcome sign. It's a keep out sign. It's a microcosm of continents and far off cultures. It's a ghost from the past. It's a community. It's a small town. It's a lyrical lagoon.
It's you...it's me...it's us sailing within our own private harbor.
brilliant depiction of WC and its "patrons". as I was reading along, I caught myself nodding in ascent cos you really hit it on the head, Relic.
I find WC a wonderful place to spend time and learn and, maybe, bring something with you for all to see.
good one, Relic.
Great job. Even Dracula read where he fitted in. It was so fun reading too! Dracula thinks of WC has a haven, a place for my voices to be heard, and my persona to be expirenced. But back to the poem, definetly true to Writerscafe, which I bet is very difficult
Thanks for the review Dracula. I think in difficult times and times of contentment we all fit in in .. read moreThanks for the review Dracula. I think in difficult times and times of contentment we all fit in in some way.
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That's what makes Writerscafe great. And this poem, it captured anyone between breakup artists, and .. read moreThat's what makes Writerscafe great. And this poem, it captured anyone between breakup artists, and the dark side artists.
Wow, I see myself in so much of this...you've personalized it and made it about poetry, how could you go wrong, seriously? I love reads about poetry, this is a rather detailed version of so many I've read, you hit it out of the ballpark with this one! I tip my hat to you and all that jazz Relic! Muchly enjoyed this one! You are a poet through and through, don't ever doubt that....
I thought you said you lost your muse? Looks like it found you!
WC is so many things to so many as you have so eloquently expressed here. I thinkthough, that what it truly is is a place to escape to, an imaginary world that one can create and mould to suit their own needs and purpose. It is what you need and want it to be.
Don't be so hasty in your departure dear relic. Looks as though the muse is not quite done with you as yet.
I've been an amateur scribbler since 2009. You can also find me on Stars Rite under my real name Tim. Many of those poems are from this account. more..