The Empty Red Seat

The Empty Red Seat

A Story by Relic

remember rain tapping at the diner window. The smooth white table we sat at held ketchup, salt, and her mournful face cradled in the palm of her hand. The menu appeared as eye-catching as a butterfly in the dark to her. Her dull eyes only scanned the cars outside, drifting by like weary clouds.

At the slightest push, the checkered floor looked ready to fall one by one. But it was us who had fallen, each piece out of place through years of doubt and frustration. 

In the past, our time together flew by, and any silence between us was fine. But this kind of silence was excruciating. It was hard to talk with a stomach full of uncertainty. Four years of magic ended painfully. Other people entered our lives and things became complicated. "I'll call ya," she said. We both knew she never would.

In the foggy windshield, her head leaned forward for a minute before pulling away. Then, with the red taillights reflecting off the wet pavement, I watched, silently saying goodbye, all the while knowing a part of me just drifted away... like a gray, weary cloud.

© 2025 Relic


Author's Note

Relic
Note to self: The poem has been slightly expanded from a poem format to a story format. Thanks to anyone who reviews. :)

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You see? I knew it was red, I knew it was a seat, and I said a stool. And I still love this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Relic

11 Years Ago

Haha, thanks KL.
I loved it! You are extremely descriptive! I like that. Have a great evening!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Relic

11 Years Ago

No, maybe someday I'll come up with something though.
Inky Blacket

11 Years Ago

Eh, me too.
Relic

11 Years Ago

Oh yeah, I'm sure you will.
I could feel the emotion in your words...So sad and yet beautifully written with style and elegance. A pleasure to read!

:) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


Relic

11 Years Ago

I appreciate the read and review. Thanks.
Story-telling at its finest, Tim. A real pleasure to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Relic

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
This is beautifully written, you have captured the moment perfectly in this piece... Those silent goodbyes are sometimes the most painful...wonderful poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Relic

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Kalypso.
Beautifully woven and with elegance - wrenching final lines. I really felt this - emotional and descriptive, lovely x

Posted 11 Years Ago


Relic

11 Years Ago

I appreciate the review Poppy, thanks.
Ruth

11 Years Ago

My pleasure x
I think I might have read this before...
I don't understand using multiple accounts, but I do understand when I read a talented poet and read remarkable poetry like you posted here.
This poem has burned a picture in my mind indeed.
Very strong write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Relic

11 Years Ago

Thanks David. The other account went haywire on me. Stuck friends request button, stuck group invite.. read more
This is beautifully written, my dear friend!..

I think it's lovely the way you carry the emotion through the details...

You capture a sense of sadness and distance...

Well penned!~xoxo~

Posted 11 Years Ago


Relic

11 Years Ago

i'm getting senile. thanks wendy. lol
Robbie~xoxo~

11 Years Ago

What do you mean "getting" senile?..... ;P
Relic

11 Years Ago

you're funny today aren't you.
I didn't see this before, because I somehow lost track of your poetry. You've captured the essence of this diner perfectly, as well as the sadness of parting.
I love thepicture. It looks like the cafe I used in "Bluebird".

Posted 11 Years Ago


Relic

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much marie. I'm here and I'm off but I always leave my account open.
Darkly colored and poignant read Relic....it's so down to earth and affecting....the title says it all.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Relic

11 Years Ago

Thanks Frieda. :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

The pleasure was mine Relic :-)

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I've been an amateur scribbler since 2009. You can also find me on Stars Rite under my real name Tim. Many of those poems are from this account. more..