The gypsy-like leaves (rhyme poem)

They flee and fly like jostling birds -

or gray moths 'round a light.

They pirouette in lazy rings -

while frolicking in flight.

Like gypsies, leaves will soon depart

with tender thoughts for wind

Soon to sweep and persevere -

in lives undisciplined.

Some will scurry in their haste

to pester pine trees praying.

Then, they'll sit, for just a bit -

In fields where I was laying.

Reviews

[L.C. Jarrette]

I love reading your poems...this one has a very calming and nostalgic feel in it. Takes me back to my childhood days, in our old house on top of a hill, where i used to play. Lots of trees there.

[Relic]

Thanks very much. :)

[Priscilla Sayers]

Serene...
Touched by the beauty in your vision
Yes I'm reading you today my friend 🙂

[Relic]

haha, I noticed. Thank you very much. When I have time I will return the favor. :D

[Raven Moonchild]

This is beautiful!! :D Excellent poem, my friend. :)

[Relic]

Thank you.

[Rilie]

Very pretty!! This is very peaceful and a nice call to nature. Good job!!

[Relic]

Thank you.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This took me to a hill with a tree and me lying under it beautiful thanks

[Relic]

Thanks for reading. :)

[Katerina Grev]

This is so peaceful, I feel like your words took me on a lovely walk. Fantastic work!

[Relic]

Thank you again. :)

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Very nice............
"In spectrum suits some pirouette
while frolicking in flight."...
Favorite lines...

Did enjoy !!...........J.J.

[Relic]

Thank you Jazzy. :)

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

You are welcome..... J.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Bravo! Whimsical, the comedy of leaves finding your soul.

regards,
al

[Relic]

Glad you liked it. Thanks.

[SJ Mullins]

Have you ever read someone's poetry and thought, "I wish I could write like this!" Yeah, that's me...wishing. Brilliant ink!

[Kelly Scheppers]

"In spectrum suits some pirouette
while frolicking in flight."

Such a beautiful praise of nature, Tim.

[Relic]

Thank you Kelly.