Spirit (ghost)

Do you believe?

Illuminated by candles,

the room was flush

with incandescent ambiance.

For a second,

our two shadows 

shone on the wall.

I was alone.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

In the late midnight hours. We will wish for something and we shall learn. We are alone. Your words honest, deep and true. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Relic]

Thank you, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[wordman]

she was in your mind,you made her real,even for a short time
you are the essence of my mind

[Relic]

Well said, wordman, thanks.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

I do believe .......... some hear voices... some feel a presence ...

Interesting..Well done..

Jazzy

[Relic]

Thank you, Jazzy.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

YOU ARE WELCOME..

[Akash gaikwad]

Spirit for me is something that is inside me and also it exist on the outside like a window which also reflects and you can see outside too. The poem is just written amazingly. The imagination has caught me like an spirit.

[Relic]

Thank you, Akash.

[Cherrie]

This has a lonely feel to it. Of love hanging on to a memory.

[Relic]

Thanks for reading, Cherrie.

[Cherrie]

It is lovely, could be the opening for thriller.

[Cherrie]

The main character could read this passage in a old journal.

[Relic]

Anything is possible, I guess. You can take it and run with it if you wish. You have my blessings. :)

[Cherrie]

well, I might knock it around a bit

[Relic]

That's fine.

[Mrudula Rani]

The two shadows became one in a union ? Or a lingering memory left your thoughts? With just a few lines you created an endless speculation. That is splendid writing.

[Relic]

Glad you liked it, thanks.

[Donna]

I like this a lot! It makes you think!

[Relic]

Thanks, Donna. :)