Sweet Ahnjolie

To a fine poetess.

An opulence of mirth befell

upon my soul and eyes as well,

the spirit of a poet's pen

which fixed in me a trance, and then,

within her words a rich delight,

a maiden had attained her knight

through tenderness and breadth of kiss;

a custom that bestows sweet bliss.

And with this poem, the words revealed

an inspiration long concealed.

Tis now I see, what poems can be

when written by sweet ahnjolie. 

Author's Note

Written by a neophyte. :)

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Being a rhyme & rhythm nut myself, I couldn't help but be entranced with the way your words are rolling along with a warm bubbling admiration, the rhyme & rhythm not the main attraction, but providing a solid wave of feeling to enhance your msg. Sometimes pure simple admiration says more than profuse praise . . . you've captured that perfect raw honesty that makes us totally believe you! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Relic]

Thanks very much, Marge. :)

[redzone]

such a sweet endearing poem you have penned Tim.... and if it was a shout out to a poet I just read at All Poetry, then her poem there is truly an inspiration that has held you in its charms....

[Relic]

Really? I'd be surprised if she was there. I was on that site a while ago but hardly ever go back. I lost the password. ha Thanks for the review, Redzone.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this makes me think of a cross between Poe and Shakespeare...i like that combination and the flavor of this love poem...

"Helen, thy beauty is to me like those Nycean barks of yore"----and so on.

j.

[Relic]

Thanks for the great review. J.

[Rye]

Wow, very nice write here, lovely really

[Relic]

Thank you very much, Ryanna.

[Rye]

not a problem, I have been reading your writes and they are very good.

[Relic]

............... :)

[Moonie]

It flows as delicately and seemlessly as ink from a poet's pen, after he's been struck by sudden divine inspiration. I think it's a beautiful way of appreciating a poet, and letting them know how their poetry touches so many hearts.

[Relic]

Thanks so much for your review, Moon. :)

[john l smith]

wonder if I should hire her????

[Relic]

If she was still around you could. :)

[heavenscentgirl1]

Written by a Neophyte you say ~ I don’t think so my friend. This is a very touching Tribute for a well deserving Poetess.
~ hsg 😇

[Relic]

I appreciate your review, Heaven. Thanks.

[heavenscentgirl1]

You’re Welcome! 👍

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem for a poet. Your words kind, gentle and sweet. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the proper ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Relic]

Thank you. She's a great poet on this site. Unfortunately, she's leaving soon which is a bit sad for me.

[Coyote Poetry]

This is sad. I tell the young writers. We must network our work. Good to use many sites. Old friends, are good friends.

[Verse]

It sounds as if she is your muse, your source of inspiration. :):)

I’ll have to read her one of these days.

V

[Relic]

She's one of the best to come along. Unfortunately, she may only be here another month. Better read while you can. :) Thanks for stopping by, verse.