Sweet Ahnjolie

To a fine poetess.

An opulence of mirth befell

upon my soul and eyes as well,

the spirit of a poet's pen

which fixed in me a trance, and then,

within her words a rich delight,

a maiden had attained her knight

through tenderness and breadth of kiss;

a custom that bestows sweet bliss.

And with this poem, the words revealed

an inspiration long concealed.

Tis now I see, what poems can be

when written by sweet ahnjolie. 

Author's Note

Written by a neophyte. :)

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely write relic about a poet you admire in her work.nice tribute!

[Relic]

Thank you, andrew. :)

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

What beautiful words of appreciation- 🌹

[Relic]

Thank you very much for your thoughts in time. haha.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This is a truly beautiful tribute to the lady poet below who i have read she is very good indeed i love her work
this is a great tribute loved it

[Relic]

Thanks so much, Julie.

[Ahnjolie McKenna]

Dearest Timothy...
Thank you for the most precious compliment I could ever wish for...and I mean that most sincerely. For you to simply say that you enjoyed my writing would have been lovely...but, you ventured far beyond that and expressed yourself in such a way that I am at a loss for words. Thank you is so inadequate. You have touched my heart with your beautiful words, and you shall never be forgotten. I hope to repay the extraordinary compliment to you...my dearest friend.

Soft smiles for you...
Ahnjolie

[Relic]

In all the years I've been here there is always one thing I've always said...there's never a need to repay Relic. ha I'm glad you liked it, Ahnjolie. I may have written it, but think I speak for others too. :) You're a very special writer and person. :)

[wordman]

and her eyes at glow,and her hair falls in such a way
and her words delight you in every way

[Relic]

Thanks for reading, Wordman. :)

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Richard🖌]

Wonderfully seamless in flow, enjambment, syntax, with wondrous rhymes and imagery to make an olde bard's heart dance as if a sallow, smitten youth once more … and, ohhh, the perfect picture!
Tim,
I'm not saying I've read your every piece, but I cannot conceive that anything you've done could best this straight-from-the-heart verse of sheer affection and admiration in homage to our dear Sweet Ahnjolie, and her incomparable heavenly gifted pen.
I am astonished she's not yet reviewed this for you, My Friend, but I am certain she will, and when she does, I'd love to hear her sighhh*

What else to say, except I dearly love it … a happy brotherly hug for this-un! ⁓ Richard : )

[Relic]

I appreciate your review very much, Richard. She's aware of the poem. I sent it to her. :)

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh - so!

[Lyn Anderson]

Hmmm. Neophyte you say? Pertaining to you? A simple, elegant piece to honour a poet you admire. Nothing wrong with being honest and straight forward.

[Relic]

Thanks so much Lyn. I'll be by your way when time permits, my friend. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Not a worry at all. I am on a bit of a read and review binge