Beth

An old one.

         

Twas when I noticed Beth's good looks -

Her ample breast and thighs,

A feeling of love was in the air

That held me mesmerized.

Her silky skin bewildered me

As did each candid phrase.

But oh, how sweet the day became

When held in Beth's sweet gaze.

Were I to find another girl

I doubt she could compare

nor correspond the way Beth does

with such a lovely flair.

Author's Note

Thanks, Richard and emipoemi.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Drawn to this by the name Beth. My grandaughter's name. She has brown eyes and at 17 is turning into a real beauty too. You have penned a delightful poem here. There is so much warmth in brown eyes. Great flow and rhyme. Your lines have an old fashioned feel to them.

Chris

Chris

[Relic]

Thanks very much, Chris. :))

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Relic.. your poem is a watercolor of a lovely and warm exchange of pleasant romantic interlude as though the earth stood still when creation placed a twinkle of hope in eyes of
eternal bliss. truly, Pat

[Relic]

Thanks very much for your comment, Patricia. It's much appreciated.