I hate death

Just feelings.

It seems like such a shame,

all that laughter, conversation,

and hanging out.

They just lowered him into the ground

like a basket of rotting bread. 

I hate death,

he's so selfish.

Reviews

[Mrudula Rani]

I too hate death. Gets me heart broken, every time someone leaves... especially without a warning.
" They just lowered him into the ground like a basket of rotting bread" this adds up all the sentiments that run through a mind at that exact moment.

[Relic]

Thanks for reading, Mrudula.

[Mrudula Rani]

You are most welcome, Tim.
Have a beautiful Christmas and a very happy New Year.

[Relic]

You too, my friend.

[Mrudula Rani]

Obrigada ( thank you).

[Gee]

Aye, funerals and the following wake never sit easy with me as some folk turn up just to get pissed and have a feed at the expense of the bereaved family....strange.
Loved " like a basket of rotting bread "

[Relic]

I agree, Gee. Thanks.

[Iam-me]

I kinda understand where your emotions and feelings are at in this interesting, unique read. As it's true. Funerals are like a bad day out. People talking, a matter of fact and laughing and joking and just taking it as normal, in a way. As an everyday occurrence. To which in an ironic way, it's in some way in this world. Is actually happening to Someone pour soul just passing away or just actually died all the time. But death is like life. It happens. unfair and unkind. And uncalled for. But we sadly all have to accept. Even though we hate it with such spit and disgust and anger and pain it causes us.

[Relic]

Well said, Dawn. Thanks.

[Iam-me]

my pleasure. Death sadly seems to be natural to happen to humans as we are not immortal. Even thou i wish we where all at times. No pain, suffering hurt and so forth with. Great poem. Enjoyed it.

[Relic]

I guess that's why they say live every moment as if it were your last.

[Iam-me]

exactly......