The sky's getting dark. (simile)

With long jagged teeth 

Lightning conceals itself from prey

behind the cloud's brush,

waiting - to strike.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

Amazing poetry... Relic. An Artist's vision of
a Lion cloud formation coming to life with the
force of a Lightening Strike with a Vengenance
so Powerful but appropriate for the Cause...
truly, Pat

[Relic]

Thanks very much, Pat.

[Dave Brown]

That is a fabulous piece of artwork
Oh!! oh ya, nice poem too

[Relic]

hahaha, thanks, Dave.

[Murugan Appa Ponappan]

Lightening seems so frightening here. Lovely words used to create the right effect.

[Relic]

Thanks, Rania. :)

[Katrina Mckeown]

Wow what a captivating piece with great imagery.. love the lighting lion image getting ready to strike. :)

[Relic]

Thanks so much, Katrina. :)

[Katrina Mckeown]

You are most welcome Relic :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what an absolute spot on image you put into my head with this one....
so vivid with your personification.
j.

[Relic]

Glad you liked it, J. Thanks. :)

[Lorry]

Nicely captured Relic. I picture wide eyed kids (of all ages), standing by the window as the storm gathers, making sure their path behind the sofa is pre-planned for when it strikes.
And when it does, the squeals and the dash begin 😀

[Relic]

haha, thanks for the review, Lorry.

[Chris Shaw]

A dynamic piece of brevity here with vivid visuals. Love the posted image. That lion is ready to strike without mercy and at speed. Good afternoon Tim from a wet and windy UK.

Chris

[Relic]

Thank you, Chris from a cold but sunny America. ha

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Wow...great painting.... and your words are GOLDEN..

Cool !!!


Jazzy

[Relic]

Thanks very much, Jazzy. :)

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

You are welcome....♥

[R.E. Ray]

Ah, the speed and viciousness of nature, and often so beautifully deceiving. A work of art in four lines, Relic.

[Relic]

I appreciate that, R.E. Thanks. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Ready for the fight. Fangs protruding. Great visuals in this short piece.

[Relic]

Thanks, PB. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. Been ages since I’ve popped on. Good to see a few old faces are still around