The sky's getting dark. (simile)

With long jagged teeth 

Lightning conceals itself from prey

behind the cloud's brush,

waiting - to strike.

Reviews

[Neville]

You are absolutely write .. only four lines maybe but my word, each one of them perfectly penned and collectively, a force to be reckoned with..

Neville

[Relic]

Thanks very much, Neville.

[Neville]

my word. you are fast as lightening.... my pleasure..

[Relic]

.............haha

[Neville]

Ya moves like a tiger on Vaseline, so ya do...

[Robert Trakofler]

this feels exactly how I do after watching the news lately:) but instead of its lurching in the clouds it rolls in my head ready to frizzle the few remaining brain cells I have left unless it can get unleashed onto the page via a lucky conduction lest of course I risk a stroke fizzle:/

[Relic]

haha I try not to watch the news anymore Robert. It's too depressing, filled with crime and violence and politics. Thanks for the review.